Sunday, June 29, 2008

dance along!

love and concern replaced by hate and pain,
it was all part of life's unpredictable game,
new waves flow in and leave a mark,
another attempt to have a whole new start.

life goes on and it might leave you behind,
if you dont pick yourself up and rush to hold on tight,
not too tight, it will slip through,
not too loose, you will fall through.

gain enough control to know it's in your hands,
then when pain hits you'll know exactly why,
life's about the constant struggle to prove worthy for the ride,
worthy enough to face the storm, the music with all the worlds might.

the music plays on and you better dance along,
there's no room for remorse or tears, def no ugly fears,
learn to learn from each fall,
before it's too late and you fall too hard.


Parth Jhala said...

dance along! i really liked the subject! like and understand the poem now that ive read it! makes so much more sense! and this is a poem which is so real! nice philosophy which is hard to put..but done so amazingly well! uve graduated with this one! :D

Кαℓчαη !! said...

i dont mean to let you down but there is a lot of aggression that comes out in your words!... :) its good! know that you picked such a non-violent( pronounced non bhaulent) way to express it! :)....i read this already but still!! mast it is!

nids!!! said...

thankoo!! both of you!!
yay! i graduated!!! :)
good no.. this way i express and no hitting or screaming! :)

Jonathan said...

right now ... im falling ...
and its hard to dance along ...

i dunno with what intention u wrote this... but whatever it wass ... its good ..

wish there was no falling down in some areas of life ...

:) ... Nice lines...